Review Detail of Cosplayqueen in Accelerator Junior Getting Thrown Around In Gensokyo

I'm sorry I just couldn't get into this. Came here for comedy, I'm ok with system and other stories but I struggled to suspend disbelief. Grammar is ok, I can understand it. Stability of updates is worrisom, but Im not going to read further, so that doesnt matter. Character design is where I think this story loses it. They were all plot puppets and the comedy was supposed to be from Jim Carey like overreactions I guess. World background is fine. I thought the first chapter was incredible from the MC perspective, there was an immediate acceptance of a system with no confusion. But that's nothing new.