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Cosplayqueen
CosplayqueenLv36yr
2019-03-03 11:01

I'm sorry I just couldn't get into this. Came here for comedy, I'm ok with system and other stories but I struggled to suspend disbelief. Grammar is ok, I can understand it. Stability of updates is worrisom, but Im not going to read further, so that doesnt matter. Character design is where I think this story loses it. They were all plot puppets and the comedy was supposed to be from Jim Carey like overreactions I guess. World background is fine. I thought the first chapter was incredible from the MC perspective, there was an immediate acceptance of a system with no confusion. But that's nothing new.

Accelerator Junior Getting Thrown Around In Gensokyo

Ligoya
4.7
67 Chs

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Ligoya
LigoyaAuthor

Thank you for your thought and don't worry about it, my style of writing is not for everyone.

6yr
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Fenn
FennLv13

Well tbh i dont even play genkyosho lol but somehow after i read, its enjoyable for me to read it and i can keep it up to what happen in the story (thanks to google tho lmao) Well yeah i really hope u dont drop this because its refreshing to read another anime/game fanfiction beside that yellow head ninja guy fanfiction lol

6yr

GaRage
GaRageLv4

One of my favorite original novel with harem genre. MC slowly build his relationship with variety of girls while at the same time upgrade his strength step by step (since majority of girls is OP). In my opinion it's much better compare to other harem original novel that have their MC >>*Bam* OP Power UP >> *Woosshh* Girls left and right getting horny toward MC >> *Swisshh* MC become GOD!!! Sadly the update is too slow T_T

6yr
BowmanW
BowmanWLv5

The only lacking aspect is Story Development and World Background. The reason why I have rated Story Development and World Background lower is because the fanfiction relies heavily on an already developed story and world, as you know, because it is a fanfiction. I feel rating that as 5 is a bit silly, considering that the general story is not actually a work of the fanfiction author. As for everything else, it checks the 5 star mark for everything. I am very surprised this fanfiction is not that popular on this site, it is very popular on the Fanfiction.net site, the grammar is basically perfect, the development and design of the OC main character and the development of already established characters was very well done. When it comes to Character Design for fanfictions, I base it mostly on how well the author can keep the personalities and characters intact, how well they can write dialogue that would be believable in the original creations, in this case, the original Touhou games. 5 Stars for Character Design/Development In general, I enjoyed the fanfiction a lot, even though I had never played the Touhou games. Throughout reading, I frequented the wiki in order to understand the story better and the characters, but obviously, this fanfiction was not aimed towards people who have never been introduced to Touhou before. Even then, I REALLY enjoyed the work done and found myself giggling like a little boy at certain parts. The fanfiction can at times be heavy, at times sad but most of the time, it is all a good laugh and is incredible interesting. Once the current arc finishes, I will definitely hop back into this fanfiction and continue reading!

6yr
DukeEverlasting
DukeEverlastingLv5

Soo good so far this deserve more credits even if you don't know Touhou it's ok Marisa is not annoying unlike the other Touhou Fan-fic the MC is kinda look like OP but still can't beat the others(because it has rules) maybe his true potential is fighting to death not Danmaku battle

6yr
iLyingGod
iLyingGodLv6

Love it...Its Good...You should read it...Its easy to follow even if you don't know touhou that much so you should try it... like seriously its good...

6yr
Ligoya
LigoyaAuthor

I think I'm doing a pretty good job with displaying the series character with their suitable personality. Shameless Author gave rating for the series rating to be visible from the search result.

6yr
pessoa_aleatoria
pessoa_aleatoriaLv3

is very good but is already 2 years since the last chapter is released i just wanted more, but apparently is very improbable ;-;

2yr
NimbusIzayoi
NimbusIzayoiLv10

I know this has been dropped for two years, but what if you came back and continued writing? I'm sure it would be quite the pleasant surprise.

3yr
KxV09
KxV09Lv14

Great fanfic! Mc needs some more guts tho Also more update if it’s not dropped .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. ..............

6yr
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