Review Detail of dragoeska in Shinobi Overlord

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This has been very intriguing as it has the main character pretty much doing his own thing and not just following along with the original MC's. The only problem I've seen is most of the personalities of the side characters like his wives in particular, tend to just have a blanket personality. If they didn't say their names would have no idea who was who. Also seems to do this with any villain's giving them the standard d@#k-bag personality. This seems to be an ongoing problem in any fan-fiction being able to capture side characters personality when they only show up in the original fiction with these traits, But giving them more screen time an author should evolve their personality inline with their own novel. (BREAK THE MOLD!!!) Other wise worth the read and support; an instant add to the library.


Shinobi Overlord


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