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ROnin2k02
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It is a work of art Childhood dreams but for *****s Update stability is perfect The grammar is "meh" almost bad The sentences are a bit clumsy The OP things is super cool The story development is a bit forced but still a good fan-fiction Keep up with the good work!

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thewhynot
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How can it still be a “work of art” with all those cons you just mentioned. I would just say “enjoyable”.

ROnin2k02
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It is a work of art in my opinion The potential is big The grammar problem can be resolved if the author gives it a proofread(can't ask to much the author updated once a day and english isn't h is native language) And i think the "forced story" and clumsy sentence will stop(probably) once the author gains some experiece But in the end is a fiction that deserves atention

thewhynot:How can it still be a “work of art” with all those cons you just mentioned. I would just say “enjoyable”.
thewhynot
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I’m not saying it doesn’t deserve attention, I’m saying that due to its many problems it isn’t worth being considered a “work of art”.

ROnin2k02:It is a work of art in my opinion The potential is big The grammar problem can be resolved if the author gives it a proofread(can't ask to much the author updated once a day and english isn't h is native language) And i think the "forced story" and clumsy sentence will stop(probably) once the author gains some experiece But in the end is a fiction that deserves atention
ROnin2k02
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Maybe it isn't an "work of art" in your opinion but for me it is and that's way i put it in the review Every person has it's personal opinion The author can update it rarely and the quality may raise but i enjoyed the 1/day chapter

thewhynot:I’m not saying it doesn’t deserve attention, I’m saying that due to its many problems it isn’t worth being considered a “work of art”.