Review Detail of Edgelord69 in Marvel's Ultra-Saiyan

While i like a slow paced story, this is slowly make me bored, what i mean is it is ok to give credit to side character but a good story will also make the development of the MC clear it is not training maniac if you think it is what i mean. But hey this story is pretty interesting with DBZ and Marvel crossover but i remember this is a fan fiction, while i like slow paced story but i worry for the continually of this story like i doubt some fan fic can finish it's story with it's slow paced development, even only minority of story in this platform reach 200+ chap. The grammar for me is average for non english speaker (like me), character design is much but too shallow, world background too small and too little surprise element. I think that's it from me. Hope this review can give the story better development 😄