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Review Detail of Haylea75 in Provocative Fiery Wife: My Superior is an Affectionate Spitfire

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The plot is good but there is no visible character development. The female protagonist is so immature that I don't know if the ML is courting or raising her. Slow burn romance is good when the readers can see the development of the characters and their relationships but in this story this doesn't happen. After almost 600 chapters I can't read this anymore because the story keeps going in circles. I wish you all the best and please don't stop writing. The progress comes with practice.

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Provocative Fiery Wife: My Superior is an Affectionate Spitfire

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