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SnoozySloth
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Note: I give 5 stars despite whatever I write below. Writing quality: 4/5. Some grammatical mistakes each chapter such as misspelled words. Also, some odd comma usage. Suggestion for author: If you're unsure whether to use a comma or not, try speaking the sentence aloud. Anywhere where you pause in the sentence to keep reading is normally where a comma would go. It's not a full-proof trick, but it might help. Updates: 5/5 so far. Updates seem to be daily. However, this author has many dropped novels. Proceed with caution. Story Development: 5/5. Story is very interesting so far. I saw a forum post a while back suggesting tiny humans surviving like in this novel. I've been looking forward to reading a novel along those lines ever since. Character Design: 5/5. Characters have interesting personalities. World Background: 5/5. Good descriptions about surroundings, giant bugs, etc. Final thoughts for the author: 1. Keep updating daily if you want to get popular. 2. Post your chapters at 12:00 AM Beijing time. That's when power stones reset. Most readers want to vote as quickly as they can to earn SS.

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Building The Strongest Human Empire(Dropped)

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WriterCVL
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Thanks for the review but you made a mistake. I haven't dropped any stories, but have put them on hold because of my writing speed. I like all my stories. If this story get popular I will naturally not stop. Also spell check isn't picking anything up. Can you point out 1 or 2 so I can fix it imminently?

SnoozySloth
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I'll take a look through a chapter and point out some mistakes. For a reader, hiatus and dropped are mostly considered the same thing. I understand the difference, but most readers that look at your profile is going to think you drop them.

WriterCVL:Thanks for the review but you made a mistake. I haven't dropped any stories, but have put them on hold because of my writing speed. I like all my stories. If this story get popular I will naturally not stop. Also spell check isn't picking anything up. Can you point out 1 or 2 so I can fix it imminently?
SnoozySloth
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I left a new comment on chapter 1 which points out some mistakes. Hope it helps.

WriterCVL:Thanks for the review but you made a mistake. I haven't dropped any stories, but have put them on hold because of my writing speed. I like all my stories. If this story get popular I will naturally not stop. Also spell check isn't picking anything up. Can you point out 1 or 2 so I can fix it imminently?