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Review Detail of Hyowha in The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure

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Hyowha
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I wish I could give the writing quality more than 5 stars. Stylistically it’s one of the best novels I have read on this platform. The form and structure is also well defined. The dialogue flows, and the world building doesn’t feel like exposition, which honestly makes it already the top 10% in the originals. The characters aren’t just some cutouts and have their own quirks and habits. The background is well established and makes sense based on their personalities. I also really like the Main leads sister. The only thing is that I feel the characters, especially the Mc, are a bit too normal. I like Characters that are more expressive. However this is just my personal opionon and won’t affect the review. The story development, albeit slow, is very steady and we can already expect a lot of future events due to to foreshadowing. The MC has a clear motivation, and it’s is explained why he acts the way he does. I’ve only read until Chapter 6 but I plan on going further. The novel is definitely one worth checking out. Since even for someone like me, who is not too don’t of Sci-if, it can be enjoyable.

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The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure

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Thank you for the kind words. Indeed I have found my characters rather subdued and a bit too level-headed for a bunch of 17-year-olds. And I do plan on improving that (along with other shortcomings) in subsequent chapters.