Review Detail of daoist_om in The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure

It's very good it feels like reading a novel by a professional author the beginning of the story has some LMS vibes you describe characters action and reaction very well dialogues don't feel expository characters feel real enough and the world is well established even though even though crippled sister is staple of many novels and animes (ex: code geass) you executed it very well . You should raise stakes I feel to get it more popular if you kept at it I feel this will be so popular.