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yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor5yr
2019-08-01 01:51

Author review 3.0 b/c my old one was outdated yet again! Things that will be in this story... 1) Late romance. Romance plays a big deal later on in the story, but for the first 100, it'll be somewhat minimum. 2) No OP MC! Yujia is very flawed. She makes mistakes and she learns from them, like everyone else in life. Wrong things that she does at one point doesn't mean that she'll keep doing that b/c she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3) Drama/face slapping will all be kept to the minimum. You won't find a lot of it here, but there might be a few occasional moments where it does happen. 4) Friendship amongst female characters. This is kind of rare in Webnovel, so I wanted to make sure that I included it. Not every female character other than the FL is an antagonistic character. 5) Lots of art scenes. This is the story of an artist, at it's very root, so you can definitely expect lots of painting. 6) Royalty! 7) Lots & lots of character development, for everyone, not just the FL or ML(s). Side characters all have their own backstories. 8) Slice-of-life, but not filler chapters. I don't think that filler chapters should exist & is a sign of bad writing. You might think that one or two chapters aren't necessary to the story, but I promise that it's all evidence of the FL's progression of character. 9) Slightly slow paced story. It's not slow to the point where it drags, but the first 50 chapters or so aren't super fast paced b/c I'm still working on developing the world. The chapters later on should be much, much faster paced & exciting! 10) Decent writing. I'm not saying that it's 100% perfect, & I'm still working on editing, but in Webnovel standards, I think I have fairly good grammar & vocabulary choice! Generally, chapters should be between 700-2.5k words, which is a huge range, but sometimes, some chapters just need to be shorter, and others need to be longer. I don't know how exactly long this novel should be, but it should be 300+ chapters. That's my current prediction! Beware of the plot twists. :) That's about all I can think of for now! Hope you all enjoy reading this novel, & please do leave a review/comment if you did <3 --Yueyi

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Maurine_Yohanon
Maurine_YohanonLv4

Thank you author for your wonderful story.. Keep it up

lonelyteardrop
lonelyteardropLv5

I look forward to this novel...hope you will add some laughter too just like The Employed Empress๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

haven't read that novel but there's a few moments of comedy sprinkled throughout this novel :)

lonelyteardrop:I look forward to this novel...hope you will add some laughter too just like The Employed Empress๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
lonelyteardrop
lonelyteardropLv5

so sorry I was mistaken I thought you were the same author of the novel I mentioned my apologies dear author๐Ÿ˜ฏ

yaoyueyi:haven't read that novel but there's a few moments of comedy sprinkled throughout this novel :)
yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

haha it's fine! hope you enjoy this one <3

lonelyteardrop:so sorry I was mistaken I thought you were the same author of the novel I mentioned my apologies dear author๐Ÿ˜ฏ
ebonyandlace
ebonyandlaceLv12

Thank you!! Loving it so far. I do hope it's more than than 300+ chapters!

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

I'm happy to hear that you like it so far <3

ebonyandlace:Thank you!! Loving it so far. I do hope it's more than than 300+ chapters!
Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3

IK. Flawed character is easy to write with. You can lead a flawed weak mc anyhow anywhere you like But not a OP one. I would've liked if the MC was OP. The best masterpeice is when MC is OP but doesn't get bored at all

yun_luofeng
yun_luofengLv4

Author Sama who is the ML ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

no one :0 there are only main characters: yang yujia, yu zixu, fu yushang...

yun_luofeng:Author Sama who is the ML ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ
_Meizhen_
_Meizhen_Lv13

Sounds very interesting... itโ€™s good that itโ€™s slow romance. Most transmigration novels always have romance which is often to forced. Iโ€™m getting tired of that. Sometimes I find it much better without a Male character. Or why not just go yuri. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ anyway Iโ€™ll give your book a shot. Sounds like my cup of tea. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

O_GS
O_GSLv2

Ahhhhh!!! I love you๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜Š thank you for this story! You are a goddess and have taught me very valuable life lessons.

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

aaaaaaaa I think I love you too??? ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ you are seriously too kind!!

O_GS:Ahhhhh!!! I love you๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜Š thank you for this story! You are a goddess and have taught me very valuable life lessons.
ayees
ayeesLv12

Definitely will enjoy it. I just hope you will stick to what you've said that will be 300+ chaps only!!got tired of vmstoriez with thousands of chapters.

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

as in 300+ I mean... it will definitely 100% have more than 300 chapters ๐Ÿ˜‚ super sorry!!

ayees:Definitely will enjoy it. I just hope you will stick to what you've said that will be 300+ chaps only!!got tired of vmstoriez with thousands of chapters.
Assassin_Blade
Assassin_BladeLv2

I canโ€™t wait! Iโ€™ll be cheering you on from the sidelines author, I wish you good luck and prosperity !!!

yaoyueyi
yaoyueyiAuthor

tysm!! ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

Assassin_Blade:I canโ€™t wait! Iโ€™ll be cheering you on from the sidelines author, I wish you good luck and prosperity !!!
CoolForniteplayer
CoolForniteplayerLv3

best autor yet

Mercedita_Damot
Mercedita_DamotLv4

I wonder who is the male lead ???

Polymerbag
PolymerbagLv2

Yay!!!

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