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Uncle_Sheogorath
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I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,

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achearon
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lol you just described a soldier. so he does act like one.