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This story is a lovely, lighthearted read, but beyond this it tends to be lacking in many aspects. The characters are rather two-dimensional and predictable, with any examples of character growth being sudden and feeling artificial in their presentation. The plot is predictable as well; though the narrative is enjoyable there are very few surprises or twists, and major developments are often spoiled more than a few chapters prior to their reveal. The setting is still largely obscure after more than 100 chapters, with description and exploration being limited to the immediate set pieces and almost no presentation of the larger world. Specific places and organizations are mentioned from time to time, but there's no explanation until they become relevant to the immediate action. As a result, several opportunities to draw the reader more fully into the narrative are overlooked by the author. Consistency of the world and story elements is lacking in many areas. At one point, for example, a werewolf drops dead under a few gunshots. Later on, another werewolf survives literally being turned into road pizza. How much punishment can a shifter take before running out of steam? This is never considered, nor is anyone even presented in having an interest in finding out. In fact, shifters run what is presented as one of the largest organizations in the world, with technology and means of information suppression greater than that of the miltary, yet they neither know how regularly-used pharmaceuticals will effect their biology, nor the quantities of such drugs that would be considered safe to administer. Issues with grammar, spelling, and sentence/paragraph structure are rampant as well. Even the names of the lead characters are misspelled on a regular basis. The quality of the story is substandard, and I unfortunately feel is falls far short of what qualifies as a Premium work. As a result, I will not be reading any more of this narrative, and if asked would have to advise others to steer clear of it: there are far better options to spend spirit stones on.

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