*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: try to warn your readers before a delayed release if possible.;,;. Positive Feedback: You did well in every aria that is graded by reviews.;,;. Personal Feedback: You had good writing, and a well thought out plot, but I'm sorry, this novel is just not my cup of tea.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;.
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