Review Detail of BoredPanda in Transmigrated by Accident

Writing Quality is great, smooth sentences, greatly describes situations, but some words may have been misused. Benefactor- according to uncle Google, a Benefactor are those who give money or other things to help those in need... I don't see how, Adrian was it?, Adrian needs any help, after all he has a family and a normal life on earth. Stability Updates is good, no complaints there. Story Developmwnt is fast-paced, things like cultivation, universes, cosmo, spirits and such were explained in Ch1.. A bit too fast paced, you should have explained those when the situation is where they do the actual things. Character Design is good, the protagonist are calm even though they got sent to an unknown place. Ah no, actually they were TOO calm, being sent to an unknown palce with magics and such, not knowing if they are going to get killed, they should have at least panicked or at least showed fear...It's okay to have a calm personality, but being too calm makes them look like they don't care what happens to them. World Background is great, transported to another world with magic and cultivation, but still part of the Universe. I envy authors like you who makes unique concepts, I hope your Novel gets the Spotlight soon. Keep up the Good work.