Review Detail of M_A_Ilmi in Transmigrated by Accident

I really like your story but you need one thing. Dialogue. Example ( My own) : "interestingly the man you are changes equation" Add said, or replied ,words that make a dialogue. "interestingly the man you are changes equation" Ezueil said. An annoyed expression blanketing his face. "Indeed it does" Malim replied, indifference evident in his tone. This makes it interesting Love it anyway and keep on going