Review Detail of Dark_Reality in Transmigrated by Accident

Okay, so I'll start with the bad things first. 1- Why did both of them accept the fact that they were teleported into an unknown world with magic so easily? It made no sense to me. 2- Chapter 7 could be written much better with the interactions and the reveal that he can cultivate fast. Now the good things. 1- I like the cultivation paths. 2- It's also good that both the characters were brought to the new world. Tips 1- Try to increase your descriptions of the surroundings such as towns and forests. 2- I found some word mistakes so try to use Grammarly or ProWritingAid to fix those. The story still has a lot of ways to improve which will make it even better.