Review Detail of DeJeL in Paradis de Fou[HIATUS]

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: "Oh! God! Sis Mesa, if you've got to scare me please do it before warning me." I want to know... is this a weird form of sarcasm in which you meant exactly what was said, or did you mean to say "Oh! God! Sis Mesa, if you've got to scare me please warn me first."? Positive Feedback: Good job thus far on keeping your readers updated on what's going on w/ updates, and when nothing was, on keeping updated. Also, you are doing a good job at your story thus far. Personal Feedback: This is not my kind of story, thus I won't be continuing to read it, I apologize and hope you continue this story for those who enjoy it.;,;. Score: WQ 4/5 Rest 5/5