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Review is a part of review swap with this author. I really like this story, the MC is cool, his cheat is awesome and the way the author gradually reveals the world building is better! 10/ 10 would recommend. My problems with the story start here. Author, WTF is with ch. 1?! The MC is a autistic genius who could not handle a normal job with a salary, so he got into drugs and alcohol and somehow became a crazy criminal? He started kidnapping, smuggling and later on, murdering when on drugs and alcohol? Man, autism is real, autists exist in society and the prologue seems to be written as a hate letter to them! And the worse thing is that the MC's crazed personality in ch. 1 never reappears again in-story! Suggestion: scrub everything in ch.1 before he meets the Goddess and gets his cheat the fuck out. Let his past life be a complete mystery. Story will get 10x better.

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Got it!

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As for his crazy personality, that is going to come up in a few more chapters when he meets his frnds. I will not disclose any spoilers but don't worry, things are going to get a lot crazy