Review Detail of MishalZamir in Paradis de Fou[HIATUS]

Okay so now I've read it. I find the story interesting and your writing quality is also fine but what actually needs stability is story development. Anyway the background is so-so. The cover is also something that intrigues me! It's not my genre but as i've to swap review that's why I read it!anyway dun forget to review mine.