Review Detail of Panqiuyan in Paradis de Fou[HIATUS]

Roger that! Thank you for your review and I would try to change it as much as possible. Actually, since its a first-person novel, its .... kinda like story-telling in one sense. But, I will still try to make it more interesting. Cyu again!

Hello again, sir. Could u be kind enough to read my latest chapters and tell me whether I should change the style too or not. The first few chapters arent well made and I think I need to rework on that. Thank u in advance!!!

Hello, kind sir. I have done an complete overhaul of my novel and would like u to read it once again and re-review it. Thank u for taking ur sweet time