WHAT?!?! FINALLY A WRITER WHO DOESN'T USE THE "ENGLISH ISN'T MY FIRST LANGUAGE" CARD AS AN EXCUSE FOR THEM NOT BEING ABLE TO USE CORRECT GRAMMAR?!? I RESPECT THIS WRITER!!

I'm sorry but I'm a shameless author... Now I'm gonna take up alot of character space so I can post my review about. I really hope people read and like my work. I like to write because it makes me happy but I'm also really shy about posting my works. I have problems with grammar, past tense and present tense and points of view but I'll try really hard so I don't mess up. Please be gentle if I do mess up and help me out in the comments on how I should have done it. I'm not saying I'll use anyone's help but that I'll try and learn from it. In case no one understands, I have a quote that fits my situation. Give a man a fish, he eats for a day. Teach a man to fish, he eats for a lifetime.

All I can say is this is a damn good novel. The only reason why this isn't 5 stars is due to the update frequency but besides that, this is really well written and I cannot wait for more

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Ok why I don't give full star. It easy I just start the story yesterday. And I just finished her here. So I don't really know if it's stably updated or no. So when I can't saying if it's I can't really down grade than this the story for just not knowing ^^. But I think 4.8 out of 5 is a perfectly note for that story I could have make it 5 but when I don't want to lie for it, I still want to let everyone know : just fucking read it ! I mean it's good, you will like every character (well in fact for now there's a little teacher that will meet my fist if he can but well :wink:). The story go with a good rythme I think, most likely the majority of the choice the main char make are good choice. The girl in this story aren't just here to insult all the existing woman (I mean they are not damn brain dead girl just here to be f****ed) like every character of this series, they have have personality, history and make wise choice or at last understanding choice. The world of this story work with rule that work greatly. It's not like you will have a random broken character that will come help the hero just when he need, everything walk logically and greatly. I don't know if I have say it right but I just love this series. I'm not English native, but I understand everything. If you don't like isekai I don't know if you would hate this series cause it's not really intrusive in a bad way. And if isekai don't bother you, come try it I really think you will at least like it.

If you are wondering why it is 17+ you got to wait for chapter 16. It is a typical isekai story with a system, but stil a fun read. worth a place in my library

Writing Quality 3/5 Barely Readable. Stability of Updates 2/5 Author Only Occasionally Updates. Story Development 2/5 Laughable, the protagonist almost died 4 times within 9 chapters because of carelessness, and the "Accidentally Learning some family secret technique" plot armor, plus it lacks anything exciting or rather interesting. Character Design 1/5 Seriously the protagonist always over react at certain events that makes you wanna just drop the story. World Background 1/5 What background? there is NONE.

I am here to give a dashingly awesome review even though i haven't read it yet, because i feel bad about bashing an idiom the author used in his own review.

When this story was updating I remember it as the most thrilling story I've read at that time, really a shame they stopped updating.________