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WHY. LI AND HIS GIRLFRIEND WAS SO CUTE TOGETHER. WHYYY~ *Coughs* Sorry. Got caught up in the moment. Anyways. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but it doesn't draw too much attention from the story as they weren't too many and the structure of your writing flows so wonderfully through another. Kudos all around, yo. I got swept up by the ocean of 'd'aww-phins' during the exposition of Life and his girlfriend and looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. The fact that he has the potential to hit up different realms definitely makes this story much more diverse and angles to play from. In short, give me more chapters, dangit. Let Legend of the Life Pugilist begin!