Review Detail of David_Whitmore in The Suit-Maker

This has an excellent story-line. The main character is flawed, and is both aware of his flaws and accepting of them. The society in which he lives is well described and stable; the Laws, as well as the inter-personal relationships with characters around him. As for the author's writing, I have learned to accept the grammatical errors due to the probability the English is not their first language; my belief is that the author is dependent upon using translation software, either prior to or upon posting this novel on the website. Once I came to that conclusion, I found it much easier to read this excellent story. To the author: Thank you for your hard work and diligence. Please keep writing as you have a wondrously creative mind. On a side note; I'm a cyborg myself. Not to the degree your characters are, but I do have electronic devices implanted in my body, along my spine, to aid in controlling my movements while reducing pain levels from bodily damage. Have yourself a great day!