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The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)

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Great story so far, Sorry I was out for a bit but I haven't forgotten how great this story is. Since the first chapter till now it's been the greatest story that I've read since I've gotten on this app .I've read this and waited for this for so long that I can't not remember The Nine Heavens Demon God Yao Jun. I hope that the author completes and writes a new novel so that we can be even more entertained than we were in this one. I think we, your readers would all like for that to happen. I hope the author has good days and writes on to be even greater in the future. Like a cultivator, people, and all things... They are all to have a final rest but I hope the author can keep writing and fighting like Yao Jun to keep his readers entertained and satisfied. Thank you Author-san for not going away like all the others and I hope that you don't go away because I don't know what I would do without your stories. I like how you used your words and I've quoted some things here and there but over all you are the best. From a faithful reader I give my sincerest Thanks to you and your writing. “Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage- Lao Tzu" A quote describing the things Yao Jun stands by and what he wants and what I hope doesn't end here. You inspire others with your words and you make other people feel better I thank you author again for writing this wonderful masterpiece.

I really love your book it is simply extraordinary. It keeps me coming back for more so thanks for the good book 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Absolutely amazing characters and setting, started off strong and here i am caught up and it’s still better than most other books on here. Definitely worth a read.

I like you author but you need to learn that having a 50ch of drivel and useless mc is not ok Before around ch 48 the story was absolute trash and just skimming is good enough cause nothing of value is there at all, the only thing you could get from that is that mc is a ***** and fucking stupid yet he can endure alot That's it....