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It's a solid story. A pretty good power fantasy if you want, with the nano machines being totally OP at the beginning and not falling off fast enough to see character development. also the editing sucks. grammar issues, double words, missing periods. At least no obvious mistakes with the names. It's pretty rough in that context and could be thrown into the Word auto correction at least once. Am at chapter 150 and still not much world building. Mostly the academy is flashed out, but not the rules that govern the world. They have martial arts, breathing techniques and qi, so are there monsters as well? What are the forces of evil and how are they different from the demon sect?