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Writing Quality is good, smooth sentences, wide range of vocabulary, everything is good except you overuse words and have missing Dots and wrongly placed Coma and tenses. There are no complaints on Updates, it's just that you should have a consistent schedule of release. Story Development is good, quite fast-paced, many events happening in the first chapter. Character Design is good, a poor man gets reincarnated( or tramsported? I guess), a typical MC character...no complaints World Background, just like any other Isekai, the new world the MC is in has supernatural thingz.

Azeal Neralum

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