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Review Detail of Kryokori in Memoirs of the Magic Swordsman

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Kryokori
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Unfortunately it feels like your protagonist is of ancient Mary Sue family. While I'm at it, I noticed a distinct change in Saryn "Sue" behaviour the very moment he changed his environment. If you put less importance on MC omnipotence and more on those 2D-background characters development the resulting story might be better.

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Memoirs of the Magic Swordsman

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