The story started of very boringly to the point that it took me several days just to finish it. The Fl’s character needs to be furthered develop and a bit more naturally. She just weirded me out. One minute she’s timid and the next minute she’s laughing like a maniac(so unnaturally). An advice is to just develop her character as the story goes it. It doesn’t need to any major plot twist, it can be just the major things she does. Because what the author did there, showcasing the ml and right after an guy insults her and she goes off running her mouth off is so not cute. It’s how you counter and the less you say but more damage dealt that’s worth admiring. And her attitude everything should just be more natural and be developed as the story moves. Because the vibe I’m getting now is that to her(FL) everything is just a joke. It just seems like nothing bothers her and she doesn’t care about anything. It’s like the ‘whatever’ vibe. This story just looks like an authors’ first story.
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LIKEI mean it took me several days to read up to chapter 10.
