The premise of the story is really good and the world is pretty intersting, but goddamn is the pace horrible. The story starts really strong and is quite enjoyable if a little bit frustrating, but still acceptable. This goes all down the train around ch. 150-200 and it goes downhill... fast... There happens so much shit that doesnt get resolved and when it gets resolved its pretty fast. If that wouldnt be nough before you can even enjoy the momentary victory of the MC it gets all ruined and something happens or someone appears who is just above MC in every way. So yeah if you want to see a MC who CONSTANTLY has to hide run and train for one to two chapters of victory every 100 chapters this is your story!
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LIKEWhy you dont have more upvotes? This is freaking true, i think it was at chapter 200+ when i stopped reading, he goes hiding and overcomes the obstacle, 1,2 chapters of relative peace , guess what another obstacle appears and he hides, and thats not all, what does the mc do? train and become stronger? No, he helps his friends because 5 ants can kill a freaking elephant that type of analogy. Thats why i dont invest my time and money in this novel.