Review Detail of timberlord in Sovereign of the Karmic System
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Honestly if the MC was someone else this novel would have been 50 percent better. The MC is a beta *****, just above japanese beta MCs. He has no backbone, no brain and braincells. He is literally unable to think for himself. And he shares everything he has with a few freeloading bitches and parasites he dont need. Literally the whole book is about him downplaying his cultivation speed because he is FUCKING stupid. Literally leave those ungrateful fucks alone and use his system and cultivate for 10 years and he can probably reach Rank 9. But oh noo he wont. Fucking retard. And he lives on the streets as an orphan for many years lmao. He learned NOTHING. He is acting like he traveled straight from Japan into the world lmao. Only anime MCs can be this brain damaged. Otherwise its a great book. FUCK.
Sovereign of the Karmic System
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It is how it is.. the main character has burdens which he doesn't consider burdens, he is only a part of the novel's world and not the center, despite him being the MC, and his behaviour matches his experience and age. He will grow more mature and calculative the more he will see of the novel's universe, but it will happen slowly. It was not a mistake to make him ride the wave of what is happening, after all, to obtain a power and become overpowered with it would have truly been a japanese main character trait.. I have tried to put as much attention into making him develop mentally, as develop in power.. that's just how I wanted him to be. He has family members that he has to take care of, and will find many friends and enemies through the years.. it's a slow process.. seemed more realistic.