Review Detail of MastersgtJames in Sovereign of the Karmic System
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Honestly, This story is a Diamond in the rough. Would be worth 5 stars across the bar... I wanted to give it a worse score but even being fed up with this story I cannot claim it is worse, for it is well written. But poorly executed. If not for the "system". Do you like reading about MC's, who are essentially puppets? Systems that give quests that are essentially, do this, or be ruined. Where you will be rewarded for doing a good deed. But if you attempt to do a good deed and fail you are punished severely? THEN THIS STORY IS FOR YOU! I honestly liked this novel, with the exception of the long drawn out background details. But the system and its ANNOYING quests killed it. Literally, Everyone comments in every chapter with system quests how B.S. it is. But, this is the author's formula, and they are apparently sticking with it. Welp. I am out. DROPPED this garbage fire. If you do not agree with my ranting, or do not care if the story and direction are completely 1 dimensional. Like playing an old-school game where you only ever could make one choice and all the other "options" were just there to give appearances. Then go for it. I'm sure you'll love it.
Sovereign of the Karmic System
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I am under no obbligation to appease your taste in novels.. Do you understand how entitled saying "If you do not agree with my ranting, or do not care if the story and direction are completely 1 dimensional. Like playing an old-school game where you only ever could make one choice and all the other "options" were just there to give appearances. Then go for it. I'm sure you'll love it." makes you sound?
What's funny is that the story in the future presents multiple instances where the MC ignores the system, learns how to control it, and much more that I have yet to write.. you've literally stopped the moment you've read a detail you didn't like. You're an "I want it all my way" reader masked as a thorough one..
You say it as if it was a negative thing.. but it's actually true. I like to know that my readers are liking my novel, but I am not willing to change it because others aren't. If I were to change my novel whenever people found something wrong with it, I would not be writing my novel.. I would be writing yours.
MastersgtJames:Your right. You are under no obligation to cater to my tastes. or the tastes of any of your readers. Just as it is obvious that you do not.
Bro you said you dropped the garbage fire. I canât see how you picked it up in the first place after you touched that burning heap of trash? (Chapter 1)
MastersgtJames:Your right. You are under no obligation to cater to my tastes. or the tastes of any of your readers. Just as it is obvious that you do not.
You obviously didn't read this LN at all. There were only a few "quests" that the MC had to do in the beginning and it was stated that these "quests" were given to help the MC get use to the "system" that the MC was given access to. There was no puppet MC. You made me think this was going to be a CRAP LN and it wasn't. You read nothing and crapped your pants over nothing too.
SometimesITalk:You say it as if it was a negative thing.. but it's actually true. I like to know that my readers are liking my novel, but I am not willing to change it because others aren't. If I were to change my novel whenever people found something wrong with it, I would not be writing my novel.. I would be writing yours.
Im assuming you dropped this at chapter 100?? Cuz the MC learns how to control the system and now just ignores its quests most of the time. There is even a massive plot twist revolving around the whole system idea and the voice coming with it. Yes it sucked at first cuz he had to do what the system told him, but he doesn't even care much about the quests or penalties it gives him now.....he just flows with whatever he finds good.
Going to start the novel after I share my thoughts on review turned argument. Somethingsgt was essentially saying that he read through to a point that that he couldn't get through and quit the novel. That's understandable, people have done it all the time for various reasons and no one can blame them. The author, however did. He was saying that you can't tell him to change his story, since it isn't for you. At the same time, however you can't dislike his story because you haven't gone through the novel. This is an conceited and arrogant way to think. Somethingsgt says that yes this is his opinion and the author is allowed to not listen to him. The author is again angry at the reply for being arrogant. While ignoring what somethingsgt was trying to say. The fans of the novel are saying that somethingsgt's argument is invalid because, the story gets better after the point where somethingsgt stops Not sure if I'm actually going to read this story,but this is just my opinion.
Going to start the novel after I share my thoughts on review turned argument. Somethingsgt was essentially saying that he read through to a point that that he couldn't get through and quit the novel. That's understandable, people have done it all the time for various reasons and no one can blame them. The author, however did. He was saying that you can't tell him to change his story, since it isn't for you. At the same time, however you can't dislike his story because you haven't gone through the novel. This is an conceited and arrogant way to think. Somethingsgt says that yes this is his opinion and the author is allowed to not listen to him. The author is again angry at the reply for being arrogant. While ignoring what somethingsgt was trying to say. The fans of the novel are saying that somethingsgt's argument is invalid because, the story gets better after the point where somethingsgt stops Not sure if I'm actually going to read this story,but this is just my opinion.
sewah:Im assuming you dropped this at chapter 100?? Cuz the MC learns how to control the system and now just ignores its quests most of the time. There is even a massive plot twist revolving around the whole system idea and the voice coming with it. Yes it sucked at first cuz he had to do what the system told him, but he doesn't even care much about the quests or penalties it gives him now.....he just flows with whatever he finds good.
Lol no. The MC barely has any power at this point in the novel compared to now. He didn't even know much about his ability apart from the basic concept of it
hung_up_my_coat:U realize ch 100 is well into a novel right?
any novel that takes 100 chapters to get good isn't worth the time, when there are so many novels that are better
hung_up_my_coat:U realize ch 100 is well into a novel right?
Well you spoiled it. Systems fad is gone dude, people see System and check if there is anything else they can read before giving it a try.
SometimesITalk:What's funny is that the story in the future presents multiple instances where the MC ignores the system, learns how to control it, and much more that I have yet to write.. you've literally stopped the moment you've read a detail you didn't like. You're an "I want it all my way" reader masked as a thorough one..
yeah dude some good read r just destroyed by these so called system with absurd penalty and slaving the mc especially since the system is gonna be in the whole story it makes its look like mc is a clown making foool out of him too make the story funny but đ¶ there should b new tags like, Ring leader system,clown mc, audience npc
are u slow? why does he have to PAY to read something that he didn't enjoy đ he is free to give his opinion and review just by the free chapters
sewah:Im assuming you dropped this at chapter 100?? Cuz the MC learns how to control the system and now just ignores its quests most of the time. There is even a massive plot twist revolving around the whole system idea and the voice coming with it. Yes it sucked at first cuz he had to do what the system told him, but he doesn't even care much about the quests or penalties it gives him now.....he just flows with whatever he finds good.