Review Detail of Vee in Anakdatu
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REVIEW WITH BITS OF SPOILER. READ AT YOUR RISK. Some parts are intended to the author. A good attempt to subtly insert the Philippine setting in the Webnovel-verse. The story is good, but a bit too fast-paced and predictable. Too fast to forget a few notes (MC's parents). Too predictable, especially that third wheel (hehe) Grammar. I sometimes get lost in the scenes and narration. Some readers will auto-correct mentally. Kinda a drag. Also, that mass release till end chapter, PLEASE don't repeat. You're supposed to build up the *******. Build the romance(?). As for the other characters, they're pretty much okay. Give them more screen time on your next work. --------------- To Author: I'd love to collaborate with you want to make the cover art for your next work. (I'm actually doing it now.) PM me on FB (fb.com/sleaghrim) for more details. :) May the Force be with you.
Anakdatu
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Heyyy! Hahaha, glad You made a review, but hey, Thanks alot! Like You were there on the very start till the end like Thank You. Maraming Salamat in Filipino if You mind hahaha! But yes, thanks for this very honest revuew and the truth is, I reread it, (I never read it actually, like I just made a chapter then upload hahah, my bad.), then I noticed my mistakes and yeah, I apologize for that, but I’m drafting the story for the second book and yes, I’m making it kinda slower paced hahah, a target of 42 Chapters and also screen time for the characters and new characters too, I noticed too that Elise and Ramil’s relationship was like “escalated quickly” but, they really are just bestfriends for now, but yeah hahaha. Thanks! Oh really?! You are making a cover art? Woww! Thanks! I’ll take a look at it but sadly, I don’t do facebook, I get intoxicated there but here, my gmail can help :) (destroyer.of.worldz567@gmail.com), thank you very very much! And sorry for the mass release, I got to excited hahahah, THANK YOU! :D