The story starts off mildly entertaining, but its lack of real depth becomes apparent the further you go. The great hope for a good story fostered in the beginning quickly soured as we are presented with one generic trope/situation after another. If that wasn't all, I wouldn't mind it if the tropes were done well, but no. The plot was written in a way comparable to the cheapest of beer when I'm looking for a fine wine or at least above-average beer.
The only reason this story didn't get a one star is because:
1. Art isn't that bad.
2. There are many, many, many worse stories on webnovel that I need to reserve the 1 star for.