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GldnApplImortality
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No originality. MC gets ****ed by his own clan stories get boring. If you want to be a hit them come up with something different. Stop following in others foot steps blaze your own path. The summary already tells me the whole God damn story.

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Monarch of Heaven's Wrath

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WorstNameEver
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hey, did you read past the first chapter? Apparently, you didn't lol. Come back and give a proper review when you have atleast read up to chapter 25. And if you think this is Unoriginal, then you should basically start dissing almost every Eastern Fantasy novel to exist lol. I am pretty Martial World has sect problems, True Martial World is the same as this (except village, not clan), Way of Choices (Ze Tian Je) has problems with people not honouring his marriage contract, Coiling Dragon has family troubles, Stellar Transformations the MC is basically left to his own devices by his family for most of the first book. Heck, even the generic **** like Invincible, Martial God Asura and Against the Gods all have family/clan/whatever troubles in the start. You are literally saying almost every good Eastern Fantasy is **** lol.

GldnApplImortality
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Lol. That s exactly my point people get tired of that same bull crap. If you go to each and every one of those novels you've read you'll see that people get annoyed with all those mob trash novels that has to do with the MC having clan troubles and every antagonist just happens have elders who come after him because MC kills their grandson. That **** is repetitive and predictable. MC gets strong, out pops a new enemy who is a higher level of cultivation. Predictable. Be unique. Ur novels not different just cuz u say the MC doesnt go down a dark path or has homicidal tendencies. And don't get butt hurt cuz some one criticizes your work man. That shows u r young and inexperienced.

WorstNameEver:hey, did you read past the first chapter? Apparently, you didn't lol. Come back and give a proper review when you have atleast read up to chapter 25. And if you think this is Unoriginal, then you should basically start dissing almost every Eastern Fantasy novel to exist lol. I am pretty Martial World has sect problems, True Martial World is the same as this (except village, not clan), Way of Choices (Ze Tian Je) has problems with people not honouring his marriage contract, Coiling Dragon has family troubles, Stellar Transformations the MC is basically left to his own devices by his family for most of the first book. Heck, even the generic **** like Invincible, Martial God Asura and Against the Gods all have family/clan/whatever troubles in the start. You are literally saying almost every good Eastern Fantasy is **** lol.
GldnApplImortality
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Also people stop reading those novels half way through.

WorstNameEver
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Mhmm. I understand what you mean, but at the same time usually what bothers me is more like what happens in Invincible. I would much prefer to see people get mad/attempt to kill the main character because thats much more realistic. It doesn't help that the people trying to kill the mc (during his fleeing of the clan) were already looking for a reason to do so (blaming the rumours on LC is an example). These tropes are common, but there is a reason they are common. Conflict always advances the plot incredibly fast and this trope of family trying to kill the main character is a convenient excuse for conflict and therefore; advancement of the plot. You also must take into account that the main character has only two attatchments to the clan, his uncle and the girl. He hates the rest of the clan for using his parents as scape goats. If I am honest, the reason his parents died is actually an interesting way of going about it. Usually it is for a grudge or something; being used as a scapegoat is a valid reason.

DeathLingers
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I stop reading them when the mc becomes a dìck head that follows his desires instead of being with that one woman whom he can actually love. Disgusts me how many have betrayed that one woman, if I wanted that shìt I would look for 18+ almost open based novels

WorstNameEver
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well, if you are up to the current chapters, the ship has almost sailed (of Liang Chen and Yan Ling) and the romance was done amazingly.

DeathLingers:I stop reading them when the mc becomes a dìck head that follows his desires instead of being with that one woman whom he can actually love. Disgusts me how many have betrayed that one woman, if I wanted that shìt I would look for 18+ almost open based novels
WorstNameEver
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Ohh and btw, somehow this story got in the top 15 original rankings being a **** story??? Clearly such a **** novel riiiiight??? Nope, good novel.