Potential for top 10 unfortunately the only thing holding it back is the stability of updates. If only he/she could release 1 chapter per day this would be higher ranked and way more popular. Thanks for writing this fan fiction its different to the other marvel ones keep going and old don't drop after 20-40 chapters like the others
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LIKEdon't wanna point at the elephant in the room but i see chapter 1 jan 18th, chapter 2 jan 31st , which is quite the gap and chapter 5 came out 2 days after chapter 4. well any way just saying if u keep at 1 a day your story will go up the ranks. And no you don't sound mean at all. I hope i don't sound mean as well....
quick question since he has been "evolving" after power ups will he get wings with paralysing barbs? would be quite cool and funny seeing him strugling get into a car then just teleporting saying cars are slow anyway or just turning around talking to a person behind him and smacking peter accidentally with his wings
OldAccount:I have been trying to post one chapter per day, and I have been. look at the chapter list for yourself, sorry if I sound mean
Kurosis:quick question since he has been "evolving" after power ups will he get wings with paralysing barbs? would be quite cool and funny seeing him strugling get into a car then just teleporting saying cars are slow anyway or just turning around talking to a person behind him and smacking peter accidentally with his wings