Bro, this is good. It has a lot of comedy. a good one at that. I came to give this review since I saw a chapter where you said to support you with a review. But original novels are just hard to get famous enough. I feel your pain. as an author myself, I wrote two novels, one was original which barely reached half a million views before I gave up on it(for now). the other which is successful is a fanfiction. I suggest you try writing one. you have enough talent to shine.
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