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Review Detail of Red_Tempest in Steampunk Apocalypse!

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Red_Tempest
Red_TempestLv45yrRed_Tempest

Wonderful novel: definitely my new top original. I love the steampunk ideas and themes. I am glad you did not drop it after the contest: keep writing pls. I like the OP MC and his goals. His abilities are srsly ridiculous. The factions in the wotld are messed up: like nearly everyone is cruel. But its the apocalypse so I guess thats ok. Mc seems to hold up ok after going through terrible situations. I do wish he would lay low for some time and build up his power. Like why does he always keep trying to join/start a faction. He could wander for a while. And maybe even stockpile weapons in a hidden warehouse with his abilities.

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Steampunk Apocalypse!

SnoozySloth

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SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthorSnoozySloth

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I get what you mean by stockpiling power. I guess it just doesn't mesh with his personality, haha.

Eli_Templeton
Eli_TempletonLv2Eli_Templeton

i agree