*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You went a month w/o an update w/o any warning ahead of time and now your updates have become a bit less stable. "but it was really just rice congee boiled with paltry leftovers donated from Mrs. Magda." 'paltry' I think is meant to be 'poultry' like bird meat.;,;. More often than once every 5 chapters advertising another novel anywhere other than in your author's notes WILL drive some readers away.;,;. For formatted text go to the following links: ๐๐จ๐ฅ๐ and ๐๐ต๐ข๐ญ๐ช๐ค: https://qaz.wtf/u/convert.cgi?text=Italic Uอnอdอeอrอlอiอnอeอ: https://yaytext.com/underline/ or if those don't work search for "Unicode Text Converter" (Works in U.S.A. but not some other countries) where is your world background? what is your world? Positive Feedback: well written, strong plot & characters Personal Feedback: I will continue reading this later even with being ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ by the constant advertising of your other novel. Score: WQ: 4/5 SoU 3/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 2/5
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