Review Detail of daoist_om in No System? No Problem! (Rebellion Against the Heavenly Fate)

I always like op mc, op mc for the win; it's just that it just jumped right into action and fighting without developing the characters(but i like how you fight scenes so I'm kinda neutral on this) you need to establish more into mc and her grandfather (and why he's afraid of her) other than that it's good.I llike it.