Review Detail of HavenlyJeep in No System? No Problem! (Rebellion Against the Heavenly Fate)

- I like Sam as a character (She reminded me a lot of Ava in my novel.) She's unique, and distinct in her own way. Has a natural curiosity a kid her age would've thought. - The Point of Views in each chapters can be confusing. I think you need to decrease the POVs at least one per chapter. Maximum two POVs. And also, the early chapters have too many POVs, which can be a bit overwhelming. - A rule I always tell myself is that, if there are at least two important characters in one place (including MC), I will make the MC has the POV. So that, the readers would not be confused. - Other than that, A GREAT STORY! I can see where you're heading with this novel. A slow-paced flow with a fleshed-out MC, where I can connect with her. I just hope that the terms and names unique to that world is explained later on. Still, a great story worth reading. The readers may have not realized that they have grew on Sam as she becomes older, and eventually loves her as a character.