Review Detail of DeJeL in White Queen Ascending
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I noticed at least one point wherein you used plural, but singular would have functioned better. Other than that, I honestly can't criticize... I heard another say you mixed tenses... either you fixed this or I just don't notice mixed tenses.;,;. Positive Feedback: If I did not critique you in it, I felt you did well... however, other than the fact that you had me wanting more from chapter one, nothing stood out to me. Personal Feedback: I enjoyed reading the novel thus far and will continue reading it in the future.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;.
White Queen Ascending
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well if you read my first and still going novel, you may see why I say I may just have not seen the tense changes.;,;. I have fixed many, but still struggle with them.;,;.
existing:Thanks a lot! I haven't fixed anything yet 🤣 too lazy. Maybe you can't criticize yet because you're still in chap 5 😂😂 you'll notice a lot after that. Thank you for the review! If I find time, I will make sure to do some adjustments based on everyone's suggestions.
DeJeL:well if you read my first and still going novel, you may see why I say I may just have not seen the tense changes.;,;. I have fixed many, but still struggle with them.;,;.