Review Detail of SnoozySloth in White Queen Ascending

I love this novel. The MC is awesome and feels like a real person. The world building is very descriptive. I look forward to the future chapters. Writing Quality 4.5/5: Some minor grammatical mistakes here and there. Nothing major. It shouldn't impact your enjoyment of the novel at all. Updates 5/5: New novel and already has 4 chapters. Story Development: 5/5. She has a clear goal. Now she needs to find her path to it =) Character Design 5/5: MC and her friend are both great! I like them both. World Background 5/5: The author has great descriptions for the world. I think we'll see it become very fleshed out as chapters continue.