Review Detail of Verithoz in White Queen Ascending

It's good. Don't usually go for stories with only one chapter posted, but that picture caught my eye, and then the first chapter just caught me Hook, line and sinker. Didnt even notice the grammar since the story flowed so well regardless. Really liked the interactions between the Mc and the "too pure for those bastard lowlifes" boy, as well as how you tell her view of the arena visit as well as her insight of the opponent and reminiscing of their likeness. Don't have much in terms of world background yet, but that is quite understandable as we haven't spent the most of time outside of a cell. However of what I have read so far it seems fascinating. Overall It seems to be shaping up to be quite the enjoyable gritty and realistic(as realistic a fantasy can get) story with an awesome Mc and obviously marvelous epic author(what? Exaggeration because I got mentioned twice in notes you say!? Pssh, no such thing, I'm not that easy! *cough* *cough*). Tried to keep the review to the first chapter since I wanted to avoid being too spoilery, and you only really need to read the first chapter to know if it's a story for you. I look forward to the continuation of this little gem, and hope you will aswell.