Review Detail of DivinePeanut in Lord Shadow

first 60 chapters, Amazing! i didn't really mind the grammar and the spelling. but after chapter 60, it just became a mess, like i mean messy as fk. the pov is all over the place, can't even follow the plot anymore. And i remember when azief said that he cant love sofia because he's scared? but when he came to earth 2, he had a relationship with other women, tf. the novel's bloody confusing and frustating, still will stick to it for a couple for chapters, in hopes that there will be an improvement.