Review Detail of idkwastaken in Lord Shadow

The story starts of amazing. Interesting story, interesting character, good grammar, though the author often switched between present tense and past tense during the beginning chapters. But then at 25 the grammar goes to shit, the romance that springs up is shit, essentially everything goes to hell and dies in a ditch. I honestly felt so let down by the horrible turn this book took, it had SO MUCH FREAKING POTENTIAL.