Review Detail of Potter in Lord Shadow

lo why is the word amatur blocked?? i did not use an 'e' here so this does not get blocked

Don't worry about it being blocked. The algorithm of the webnovel might mistake it for a curse words. It happens to me all the time. Anyway, I am thinking about hiring an editor and probably will advertise it on the forum. My previous editor have all run away so....that explains a lot of the grammar mistakes in the beginning. Anyway it does get better in the later chapter. Though you have to survive the grammar Hell in the earlier chapter first...And I do read it and take your comments seriously. Don't worry. You can also contact me on discord and other platforms. And I usually read comments on the newest chapter

Regarding usage of tense past tense is simply a convention and not an absolute necessity ; depending on how the novel is structured , present tense can be used as well albeit with some difficulty since it requires a more radical approach to the writing even so some of the best authors have used the present tense as well in their novels moreover there's a style that involves switching between the tenses as well especially if the story involves multiple POVs or timelines to convey a certain element of ' uniqueness ' or : intensity' between parts that showcase distinct emotions or viewpoints such a style if properly executed can lead to an interesting result in the case of this novel based on how it's structured .

This is all wrong. I shouldn’t be up here. I should be back in school.

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oh gods you are fucking pathetic, you gave a 1 star review just for grammar. If you dislike it then give 1 star for this and then judge the other points for what they are.