Review Detail of screwyoujerks in Lord Shadow
Review detail
I feel so betrayed. In the beginning of the story the author depicts a fantastic character who doesn't seem to involve in being lustful Pig or tied down by any sort of companionship. It felt like a man against the world is trying his best to survive to grow stronger to Triumph. The setup for the Apocalypse had me waiting for the Mythos oh, but then he added Sofia. At first I thought he's going to handle it properly were is this going to be a short a Ally until they parted ways. But then it turns the classic light novel Horror Story of girl teases guy but in the most annoying way possible you hate the girl you want her gone but the guy endearing towards her and they had some sort of fake love that blossoms and makes you want to tear your eyes out. The story which had such a good start and idea, was destroyed to the point where it's unrecognizable. Please understand that if you read this book you will not be getting the quality characters that you seem to be promised in the beginning. You see his first companion die you think the author has balls. But it seems like they are cut off by someone halfway through the beginning. I would not suggest to read whatsoever! Also please read through the other comments hidden between the 12 year olds who don't know what actual relationship should be like are negative comments you point out the faults in the story. This isn't a complaint this is a warning do not waste your precious time to grow attached to a character who will be destroyed in the most gruesome way an author can!!!!!
Lord Shadow
Keikokumars
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Okay so a response saying exactly why I said what I said and getting into more detail about my exaggeration of the term betrayed, why I got so frustrated with the novel, and that my opinions my own it doesn't really matter in the fate of the world. But then I had a Chinese error sign occur oh, sorry Mandarin. So still trying to retype it, ill just say I did have a good response xD
Immortal_Kaizer:U really want to share your hate to the novel... Did u
I will give u credit ( also if you're wondering about any terminology I use such as the word betrayed oh, I will reply to someone who askes about this same deal) but u do a good job with eesponseding to bad comments, I don't know if you remember this is fraction at all but you told me to continue reading. And because continue to create a good mithos and world-building that's going to continue but then the 30 SpiritStones for chapter stopped me. I posted review more of an explanation because if I bought Spirit Stones to read up until the newest chapter I could have bought a full set of harrypotters books. But since I plan on getting a month membership I will probably finish reading up to the new chapter because u said something earlier stuff is explained.
Keikokumars:Sad you felt that way. Hope you find a good book
I hope that the question you want to get answered do get answered in the chapters. And thanks for reading my story. I know my weakness in grammar but that is also explained in the author note. It is ahrd when changing sites because I used to be in RR and most of them already know my story and why but Webnovel seems to have a higher readership. Had to try once in my life to get my name known right?
screwyoujerks:I will give u credit ( also if you're wondering about any terminology I use such as the word betrayed oh, I will reply to someone who askes about this same deal) but u do a good job with eesponseding to bad comments, I don't know if you remember this is fraction at all but you told me to continue reading. And because continue to create a good mithos and world-building that's going to continue but then the 30 SpiritStones for chapter stopped me. I posted review more of an explanation because if I bought Spirit Stones to read up until the newest chapter I could have bought a full set of harrypotters books. But since I plan on getting a month membership I will probably finish reading up to the new chapter because u said something earlier stuff is explained.
At first reading chapter 1-30 wow this is good but then the timeline got twisted. Past mc present mc future mc then somewhere in the universe. I don't get it so I totally skipped that kind of shit. A game with xianxia with reincarnation with system, slice of life? A ****ed up love story. Anyway the chapters are repeating. đ
Important: Is the editor notes fake? Why there are so many bothersome things like 'should have save' 'could runned later' etc? Also why do you use ' and not " for talks? (not that important but still.) and then you use caps for all titles and stuff within the story which I find really ugly. It's most just because of the first problem but together with the reviews that aren't made by some fanboys or people who don't know how to rate/make a review right, I pride myself in having reached the chapter number 26 without getting extra temperamental or cursing everything about your and your novel existence. That's it.
Keikokumars:Sad you felt that way. Hope you find a good book
Nazarach:Thanks for warning ppl off this novel ^^ I think I would have fallen for the same pit as you - good beginning with level haeded mc and then it apparently devolves to... let's call it the usual scenario >.>' Is there a novel (or more) you can recommend that keep their promise?
RI I'm already neck deep in since a long time ago x) it's THE best novel here imo ^^ litow I will give a look :) many thanks :D
JSKOPOP:Reverend insainty or lightning is the only way
deleted_javascript:Thanks for the warning, I try my best to avoid these types of novels. Lucky for me I read comments. (Sorry if it offends you Author it's just my honest opinion)
