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Hydrosphere
HydrosphereLv55yrHydrosphere

I mean the story is very boring, there's so much transition from future and the past, like mann can you just calm the fck down, i mean like wtf its very confusing. Example the next chapter will be in the future instantly then will show you the future mc, like i mean if you're gonna show the future mc whats the point of building the character right wtf

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Lord Shadow

Keikokumars

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Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthorKeikokumars

Sorry you felt that way. The future MC was in Loki timeline and not the current MC. The whole point of Loki time travel is to change the future that he saw. And in that future Azief was not as compassionate and was most lonely than he is now in the current timeline

DarkEdenGod
DarkEdenGodLv11DarkEdenGod

Ey shut the **** up Don't cry like a little ***** if your brain can't understand it ok.... good

Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5Rawr_Kitten

... ok yeah seems like a nonsensical confusing read.... if it bounces between tinelines over and over... then its not even really focising on character growth if your already seeing the person in the future... seems redundant

haathhi
haathhiLv4haathhi

The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

Yet Loki kept trying to make the future the same, ie making him and the ice slùt get together or not stopping him from being hurt and invaded in ice with ice slùt. Honestly the romance ruined it completely and Loki forcing him to get with random thots made it worse

ze_ro
ze_roLv10ze_ro

**** you

novel_fanatic
novel_fanaticLv13novel_fanatic

That makes sense...

Keikokumars:Sorry you felt that way. The future MC was in Loki timeline and not the current MC. The whole point of Loki time travel is to change the future that he saw. And in that future Azief was not as compassionate and was most lonely than he is now in the current timeline
Haku_Cianci
Haku_CianciLv4Haku_Cianci

Ya

Maestro01
Maestro01Lv4Maestro01

wait did i just got a spoiler, did you mean in the future chapter the MC will be the LOKI!!!

Keikokumars:Sorry you felt that way. The future MC was in Loki timeline and not the current MC. The whole point of Loki time travel is to change the future that he saw. And in that future Azief was not as compassionate and was most lonely than he is now in the current timeline
keelan_moore
keelan_mooreLv10keelan_moore

Right

Keikokumars:Sorry you felt that way. The future MC was in Loki timeline and not the current MC. The whole point of Loki time travel is to change the future that he saw. And in that future Azief was not as compassionate and was most lonely than he is now in the current timeline
Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthorKeikokumars

I didnt say that. But I will not deny it. I like people thinking about it. Who knows? Maybe you ae right

Maestro01:wait did i just got a spoiler, did you mean in the future chapter the MC will be the LOKI!!!
Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthorKeikokumars

Slut? I think you have problem with women man. Chill

DeathLingers:Yet Loki kept trying to make the future the same, ie making him and the ice slùt get together or not stopping him from being hurt and invaded in ice with ice slùt. Honestly the romance ruined it completely and Loki forcing him to get with random thots made it worse
alfie0123
alfie0123Lv13alfie0123

alfie0123
alfie0123Lv13alfie0123

haathhi:The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.