Review Detail of HK42145 in Life Hunter
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The story isn't a terrible one but unfortunately the writing doesn't carry it across- this is due to a combination of mistakes in word choice and grammar as well as a general lack of understanding of the meanings of words. If you love reading MTL books for some reason, it should work for you but otherwise I would suggest you steer clear. If the author gets an editor and re-writes the chapters, I may re-review.
Life Hunter
AhraManyu
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If what I'm reading is an edited version, I can't imagine what it was like before... I admit I've only read the first 2 chapters so far, but the writing quality makes it really hard to get through.
AhraManyu:Your words and rating are fair, I edited all the first volume since, if you're willing to try again, I'd want to know if it's better for you.
Drethin:If what I'm reading is an edited version, I can't imagine what it was like before... I admit I've only read the first 2 chapters so far, but the writing quality makes it really hard to get through.
Get a editor evena freind who is a native in english and had passing grades in school is good enough... what you need to do is if you arnt a native english speaker get a person who is to help traslate edit and teach you the proper words... it may seem harsh but picture if people of other languages constantly butchered your language and you see it every day... after a while you would rage and not read what they write.. its the same on here many people buthcer english so badly we get ill reading it and cant tolerate reading it... its ok to admit you cant write it well but if thats so please dont write it then... ask a freind to edit it and write it down then we can all enjoy what your trying to post
AhraManyu:Kay, gonna cry in the corner for a minute.
No, but, seriously. I don't think I'm that bad. Although it's me saying that, I still think my English is decent. As for the first chapters, I edited them but I didn't really change the structure that much, so maybe its because of that people think it's a bit hard to read. Maybe at some point I'll make a really serious edit. Well, most of my readers don't mind about it, so I'll just do the best I can on that aspect. Thanks for taking the time to write this. Also, maybe I'll try to get someone better than me to read it at least to point me some really serious mistakes. Good day =)
Rawr_Kitten:Get a editor evena freind who is a native in english and had passing grades in school is good enough... what you need to do is if you arnt a native english speaker get a person who is to help traslate edit and teach you the proper words... it may seem harsh but picture if people of other languages constantly butchered your language and you see it every day... after a while you would rage and not read what they write.. its the same on here many people buthcer english so badly we get ill reading it and cant tolerate reading it... its ok to admit you cant write it well but if thats so please dont write it then... ask a freind to edit it and write it down then we can all enjoy what your trying to post
Just read the first chapter and while it has some odd sentences as far as structure goes they are relatively few. It is rather well written. Not even in the same realm as MTL.
AhraManyu:No, but, seriously. I don't think I'm that bad. Although it's me saying that, I still think my English is decent. As for the first chapters, I edited them but I didn't really change the structure that much, so maybe its because of that people think it's a bit hard to read. Maybe at some point I'll make a really serious edit. Well, most of my readers don't mind about it, so I'll just do the best I can on that aspect. Thanks for taking the time to write this. Also, maybe I'll try to get someone better than me to read it at least to point me some really serious mistakes. Good day =)
Read it out loud. I was pretty bad at this but after reading thousands of books I got used to the flow of how english writers write.
AhraManyu:No, but, seriously. I don't think I'm that bad. Although it's me saying that, I still think my English is decent. As for the first chapters, I edited them but I didn't really change the structure that much, so maybe its because of that people think it's a bit hard to read. Maybe at some point I'll make a really serious edit. Well, most of my readers don't mind about it, so I'll just do the best I can on that aspect. Thanks for taking the time to write this. Also, maybe I'll try to get someone better than me to read it at least to point me some really serious mistakes. Good day =)
The grammar isn't that bad, but the story's a bit boring. So far, we've got the classic "acting on a whim MC". The world is boring, there's nothing interesting, and he just teleports anyways. The females feel like, eh, since everyone's pretty and they're way weaker than the MC. He doesn't have fun. Hmmmm... but he isn't that bad... Well, just boring. The grammar, IDGAF, bc I've seen much worse, and can still understand. And the idea is nothing new, this novel... Basically, its got nothing going for it other than the fact that you won't be angered to death reading this...
AhraManyu:No, but, seriously. I don't think I'm that bad. Although it's me saying that, I still think my English is decent. As for the first chapters, I edited them but I didn't really change the structure that much, so maybe its because of that people think it's a bit hard to read. Maybe at some point I'll make a really serious edit. Well, most of my readers don't mind about it, so I'll just do the best I can on that aspect. Thanks for taking the time to write this. Also, maybe I'll try to get someone better than me to read it at least to point me some really serious mistakes. Good day =)