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FeetGourmetAuthor6yr
2018-09-02 20:06

Hi everyone, i am the author of this novel called Lovable Music Warrior. I am totally inexperienced in writing... So i need you to at least leave some comments or reviews if possible, so that can learn and possibly get better at writing for you. Updates will be 1 chapter per day maybe 2 if i had nothing else to do. Also you can leave me some recommendations for music and i might put it in the story along the way. Of course it can be almost anything. Also i am trying to edit all the mistakes i possibly made so, if you see something retarded here and there feel free to tell me about it 😂😂😂 yeah and English isn't my main language but i will try to make as few mistakes as possible thank you.

Lovable Music Warrior

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Oniichan_Thickskin
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I'm taking your 3.5 stars reviews, take this on here instead. it make a lot more sense for the first reviews. truly.......I hate this 140 characters limit

6yr

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DisappoinmentLv4

Lets see... It isn't that bad brother... I've seen worse .. The only that buggs me is that you didn't mention me in the story at all you bastard.. 😂😂😂 I expected something like my older brother is never home as well but you didn't even write something like that. 😂😂😂 Just wait till i come home someone is going to get a beating once i come home 😂😂😂😂

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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